Oc Derrick Richard :Remake:

i remade my oc Derrick. i remade it because i did not made derrick more emo type as i said before and since i played saints row the third In explosive pack!!.to make him Derrick ....hes wears a "Shadow Assassin" battle suit and got a moon with blue lines on the back of is outfit.

"About Derrick Richard Bio" He is The Dark Blue Moons Commander Derrick the Blue Moons Needs the Red and Blue Stars bright power for war of the Red moons but the red stars betray them and killed some of them in the past this year there needing the Blue Stars the destroy All RED star members in every areas of locations in the world was once a normal boy had emo friends name Mat Morgan, Danella Storm and Mindy Flower Derrick thought they looked cool with that style so he wanted to be like his friends that were the hair and clothes so he did the same! he had got black hair and a shirt and tore jeans he was spending time with his friend Mat Morgan who had talked about liking Danella Storm and mat thanked him Derrick left is house to go home but a the bully fallows and the bully bulled derrick out side the bully punch him in the face as he failed. Derrick bleed from his mouth as he counted to go home. his dad Dennis Richard looked at derrick as he came home his dad said" Derrick what happen to your mouth...its bleeding!" Derrick said "its..noting dad" his dad said" looks like you had a fight..." Derrick" What!...i mean no..i failed" His dad looked a him and said Ok.Derrick went upstairs but he was sad all night.His young sister Jewel Richard said to derrick as she opened the door" Der" your mom said its time for dinner..Derrick s aid im Skipping dinner jewel it.. jewel came too him and looked a him she said "what happen der?" Derrick said "you don't want to know about it!" Jewel said" be honest and i wont tell on dad and mom ok...with me der" He said fine..i got beaten up...Jewel" she said oh by who..? Derrick say "a bully did" she looks a him shocked and say" oh...derrick..." derrick says " grr that bully from school but why would he do this to me but no one mess with me.NO ONE!.. jewel said "oh im sorry that happen to you der" Derrick said to her" i shouldn't worry about that..but one day i will beat him up" jewel said "try not to do that your a good person brother" derrick says" i know that but no one mass with me!" jewel sad derrick cam down" derrick says" right then jewel i will clam down i will get ready for school tomorrow" jewel said"um alright then der" see later then" Jewel left out of derricks room while derrick is cheering up from his sadness then he goes to sleep.

The Next 7 years
Since the Death of Dennis Richard and Sandra Richard the two who made the Dark Moons Group the one is in charge is there son Derrick is now the Commander of he Dark Blue Moons after his dad died from Whitney O' harrier He very angry about his parents deaths and wants to kill all Red stars Member's and wants Whitney's head to be poof shes died its hard to find her and her red star groups " the dark moons have have super soldiers,spy's and high vehicles. he let his sister Jewel be a spy that what she wants to do for her parents so she do spying.Derrick is working on doing a mission on his own trying to find the Moon stones to open the Red Stars Location maps and a friend of his Willy Johnson told him were he can find those stones and get them back there were at in old minding cave but be care full he in there says. Derrick went to go the the minding cave to get the lost stones he can Read whats in the cave it was muted demons Bats they were big he had to fight so they wont get to him. he reach to the end of the cave and he saw the boss he had to beat him to get to the Red stones.Derrick killed the demon boss and went to get the stones in the box of chest he open it and saw two stones derrick look and said " hmm that's funny i though it will be more then two stones ..but these bat people had to keep two stone then 10 stones ...well 2 down ...8 two go he says while getting out of the abandoned cave full of Bat demons or should he say "cave demons" as he got out derrick got out it was morning derrick looked up at the sun and says"that cave is super dangerous hope nobody wont go in there ever" he puts up a waring sigh too keep away from others.Derrick Came back from the bad cave and to his HQ. Willy was looking at the stones he said that the two red stones are sating up now we need 8 more derrick was sure of that he walk out and jewel came up with 3 stones derrick was a bit happy what her sister did to find them and she and the Soldiers also got a Special someone his name is Mike Morgan Age: 24 and was Red Stars Assassin.Derrick look at him and think of him as a friend he knew before as derrick told jewel to put him is the aid house so he will be healed and wherein a jumpsuit.When Mike was healed derrick went to meet him and tell him about himself and derrick heard that his his bother Mat Morgan died from Whitney Derrick looked a him and say" Hey don't worry we will destroy her and my parents died from her and me and you will get our revenge hmm ok?"Mike look at him with in OK look they shake hands and looked happy to become friends.

2 years past when derrick is now 19 years old and ready to take on the red stars and red moons he have to take on the red stars first so he bought the whole army to take out Whitney and her stars members but when they go there the place was abandon someone already killed all red stars member's but one is not derrick had thoughts to his head and he Sinced the Red Star's Assassin princess around here and finds her as she tried to run away but derrick used his power to grabbed her in the arm as she said "who are you guys?"he says "hmm Well Missy we are the Dark moons your power of your Red Stars and here to destroy you types for the Betrayal of Us" shes says "What! what did we do to you guys?? " your Mad Commander went crazy and its time to put you in your end!" as she said her last words Derrick knock out Kate and tell jewel to taken her for training for the Dark Moons. as derrick went to see more information on the red stars and watched the old video camera of how Whitney killed all red stars members derrick sawed it he said "What The Heck?? how did she killed all those members what power is that?" jewel said "wow we have to get this to HQ derrick said "I agreed with you hmm so we can see the power and see how to destroy her once and for all" but he all so saw the man who was once

5 years past derrick is 25 has a big mission to do his ask jewel to go with mike and willy but then suddenly he undergoes to someone was controlling him and heading down o kill mike when Derrick was going to kill him with his powers by coking him but Mike saw who was controlling him a unknown man Mike hit him with is Blue Star powers and Derrick stop and his head was hurting Willy and Jewel saw unknown man but wont tell derrick about it.after that Derrick will go with Kate to destroy Whitney.as they both finally founded her Derrick and Kate stared fighting her but she punch Derrick away and pushes Kate to the edge in the window crashes then Kate fall but grabbed the floor to hold on. derrick Look when Kate is about to fail if he fail to Beat Whitney Kate will fail to death in the end so Derrick was fighting her to the end. Derrick beat Whitney a she trow a flash grenade at him and he cant see anything but then Whitney run off,derrick was mad yet again. derrick rushed to get Kate up when she almost failed when he got her up she fall asleep.derrick said to himsef"dam Girl .. falling asleep on me hmmm.. mandy god hate the B**** but you.. your interesting to me girl i will remember that for a bit but now its 5:50 time to go back to HQ". later it was morning Derrick Carried Kate back to HQ for aiding when she got sleepy from the fight with Whitney.When Kate woke up and saw Derrick holding. Derrick wanted to say this to her he said Kate.. i have feelings to share with you hmm... sweetheart and your very nice" then Kate very flirted of what he said to her then a kiss together. later derrick and kate are back derrick is happy after that kiss but not so when mike tells him about Willy's death and now derrick had a happy and sad face.the end ...now derrick tells all of his dark moon member's that we are ready for the real fight for our lives with the red stars and moons.

Name: Derrick Richard
Race/Nationality:Caucasian/American
Birthday: November 20
Age: 25
Occupation: Commander ,Assassin of The Dark Blue Moons
Gender: Male
Blood type: AB
Hobbies: practicing shooting
Likes: Himself
Dislikes: his ex-girlfriend and Red Stars
Favorite food: Meat and vegetables
Forte in sports: swimming and running.
Fighting style: Dark blue moon's assassination techniques
Family/Relatives: Dennis Richard(Father Deceased) Sandra Richard(Mother deceased) Jewel Richard( young Sister)Mindy Flower(ex-girlfriend) Kate O' Harrer (romance interest)
Personality: Derrick is friendly Emo man He strikes up a friendship with Mike moments after meeting him. Derrick is alike to the Emos Boy but more hot guys like him but no worries he is an ok guy. he really hats his ex-girlfriend